100 word challenge week #13

It was the grand finals of Chess Boxing. Who will win? The Big Burns or Hawk Claw the match has a begun Hawk Claw gets the first hit. It's been 20 min and the Big Burns has lost all his knights. 45 min into the finals Hawk Claw has lost one bishop and four prawns. The game has gone on for an hour and no changes. Nothing has been effecting each other still. They decided to take a 15 min break to regain energy. the match has gone on for two hours and 46 min but they were exhausted and in pain. They both fainted.

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  1. shybeardancerDecember 7, 2018 at 9:15 AM

    Your story is really good and interesting it really gets you sucked into it. It makes you want read more. Make sure you start with a capital with every sentence.

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  2. cutehamster654December 7, 2018 at 9:28 AM

    Your story was very interesting once i started reading it i didn't want to stop till the story ended it was very good. I like the detail you added like how the story tells how long the match had been.

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  3. ms3679245December 7, 2018 at 9:28 AM

    something I liked about your story is it's very interesting a different and it make's me want to read it over and over again.

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